My favourite place is the Taronga tramp park because there is three
different places.
1. One place is a basketball tramp that you can shoot hoops.
different places.
1. One place is a basketball tramp that you can shoot hoops.
2. The second one is the jumping one that you can do different
tricks.
tricks.
3.The third place is the one near the counter.
4.There is another place down the stairs that has a climbing
challenge and there is a slide that you can go down.
challenge and there is a slide that you can go down.
There is a hole lot of other things and there sometimes has a
challenge that you can have a lot of fun and sometimes you get
whacked in the face with a little bit of a spinner that you have to
jump over but instead of jumping over it me my cousins and my
brother were getting hit in the face and the rest had to watch
and they have to wait until they are older. The end.
challenge that you can have a lot of fun and sometimes you get
whacked in the face with a little bit of a spinner that you have to
jump over but instead of jumping over it me my cousins and my
brother were getting hit in the face and the rest had to watch
and they have to wait until they are older. The end.
Sounds like a great place, Xavier. Please remember that this piece of writing needs to be editing - your last paragraph is one big sentence!
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